There are a number of problems with the first comic, some very aptly pointed out by Phil. First, it's kinda tough to see what going on in the first 3 panel because scenes is just too far away. Second, Chris's head has a weird perspective coming out of the car. Thirdly you can't really tell Dom is shooting Phil in the leg, let alone has a gun in his hand. Fourthly what is that other thing in Dom's hand? Fifthly the sound effects are bad. Maybe I just criticize my own work too much, but I was in a rush drawing this late at night :(
Here's a preview panel of the Apples story for your enjoyment. I hate resizing images.-Beverly Hills Ninja is on!
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